Draft Two for Source Magazine

 This is my Second draft, for my front cover i added more cover lines as before there was only 3 making it look very empty, from my feedback i got told to add more cover lines and more Colour as it was looking dull and wasn't attractive .

 For my Contents page I was told to make the text smaller and the layout neater, and also to add how readers can get in contact with the magazine so they will can feel more involved, Change the layout of the images as they were all over the place and made it look messy.
















Fot my Double Page Spread i was told to add more text as it wasn't giving the reader the amount of information they paid for. Also i was told to make the pull quote straight behind Ade head as it made it look very unorganized and weird. I added Drop shadow to my main image and the pull quote, it made it stand out and attract the reader to that section.